Monday, June 14, 2010
Added more time to the scene 27 where she gets dragged under the bed. I'm not sure if it adds too much time now or not...The audio doesn't line up anymore, I need to inform my audio person of the time change so the audio can be fixed to work with it.
The scene where she opens the closet is not changed in this video. It's rendering right now.
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Tahlia
ReplyDeletelighting in rendered shots is looking good and moody.
:10 - when she sits up in bed, one of her hands should be used to prop her up. As of now, she seems to be using all stomach muscle to rise. Perhaps plant her left arm on the bed to help her sit up.
:40 - walk towards closet door looking much better now, you've eliminated the floaty look you had before..
:41 - girl needs some backlighting, or rimlighting to accentuate her silhouette, and separate her from the BG.
:46 - Teddy bear needs some more light on him as he falls out of closet.. There is adequate light on the floor when he hit, but not enough when he is in freefall
:51 - if you could rework her hands covering her mouth in horror, it might read a little better. I think it might be that her fingers are spread too much, or the angle at which she covers her mouth is off a bit. Not a major issue, but something I know could be improved a touch
:52 - still need a better camera angle to cover underneath the bed. The tentacles are coming out from underneath, but they do not look like they are connected to anything. A bedspread would do the trick to cover underneath.
1:09 - perhaps for more impact, the creatures eyes could open as her features distort.. and the eyes could be cold and reptilian or glowing.